suggestions for successors

The writing class was very hard, because, we had to do a lot of homework. We must write diary on blogs, take pictures, read English book, and typing speed trial.
So, if we take to archive success in Writing IV, we must 3 things to do.

1, We have to come the Writing class, because, we study about how to computer in the class. And if you absent the class, you cannot to know you should to do.
2, We have to write the diary in blogs everyday, because, we must write many blogs. And if you take the picture, you can put it in your blogs.
3, We have to read the many English book, because, we have to write the book review, it’s difficult for me. So, we should be used to read English book.

The class is very hard, so do your best. [146 words]

Talking

Today, I went to talk about Hawaii in the city with my friends. We will go to Hawaii as a graduation travel. We are exciting!! And we talk for 3 hours in Doutor. After then, I went to Misato’s house with Mitsuna. We ate a delivery pizza. It’s very good☆ and we talk about Hawaii, school, friend and job for 10 hours. So, I went back home at 5 am. But, we enjoyed it!! [75]

Gokuraku Yu

After working, I went to Spa with my friends. It is Gokuraku Yu. Maybe the spa open until 6am. Spa is very good!! So, we were warming. I like spa☆ [31]

Typing

Typing is very difficult for me, because, my English and typing skill are very poor. But, I think after this class started, my typing is little quickly. And typing is very important for business, so this class is very good. I practiced typing and English in this class, so I think I will useful to learn in this class.[59 words]

GIFT

Today, I went to Tsuruya, because I want to buy a gift. The gift is for my boyfriend’s house. His family is always kind for me. So I’m glad. And I want to send to gift. And I bought a coffee, cookie and tea set. When they are glad, I will happy☆ [53]

31

Today, I worked for 5 days until 11 pm. After work, Futaba chan is my jobs friend and I had a ice sand. I had a Caramel Ribbon. And we enjoyed talk for 30 minutes. And we came back in home. I like 31☆ [45]

DAIFUGOU 2

Today, we played Daifugou in McDonalds. We made a bet, and I lost a wager 500 yen. I was very sad. But it was very fun. So, we stayed for 6 hours. We had a good time☆ [38]

DAIFUGOU

Recently, my boom is DAIFUGOU. It is card game. My friends and I always played it in McDonalds and Joyful. Sometimes, we played for 5 hours at 4am. And sometimes, we made a bet. And always, I lost a wager. But, I like DAIFUGOU. It’s very fun☆　so, let’s play it!! [52]

Writing IVc: Portfolio

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Student ID: 04230
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Totals	fn	Indices
Book reviews	0	0	3	6	0	4	13	13/18	0.14
Blog posts	0	4	28	23	8	11	74	74/90	0.16
Words	0	225	5410	2299	2038	604	10576	10576/7500	0.28
TOTAL	0	---	---	---	---	---	---	---

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below)

1.1. Showcase	Short titles [+ links]	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	¶	W	C	L	P	M	Notes
Mega- essay 07.10.12	Kumamoto	07.10.10		867			1
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26	My favorite places	07.10.26		314
Movie review 07.11.11	Toy Story	07.11.10		304			1
Community life 07.11.25	Community life	07.11.24		529			0
TV in Japan 07.12.09	TV	07.12.08		341			2
Learning w/ computers 07.12.21	Learning with computers	07.12.19		336			0
Totals	---	---		2691			4		---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

My best essay is Toy story, because I like it and it is very interesting. So, I could easy to write.

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	Kumamoto	2007.10.10	20	good！
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	Learning with Computers	2007.12.19	12
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Community life	2007.12.05	38	I'm glad!
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• 
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase	Numbers of words	Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*	20	2007.10.17
3.2. Best typing speed trial*	73	2007.12.05
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)	59	---
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials**	61	2007.12.05 2007.12.19 2008.01.16

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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	TAXY OF TERROR	07.10.17	80
2-02	L.A.Detective	07.10.22	79
2-03	HEIDI	07.10.29	103
2-04	Jane Eyre	07.11.09	98
2-05	Brad Pitt	07.11.26	64
2-06	American Life	07.11.26	62
2-07	Mr Bean	07.11.27	43
2-08	PRINCE William	07.11.27	46
2-09	JUMANJI	07.11.27	47
2-10	London	08.01.02	38
2-11	JAWS	08.01.3	32
2-12	ESCAPE	08.01.03	43
2-13	TWO BOYFRIENDS	08.01.05	44
2-14
2-15
2-16
2-17
2-18
---	---	TOTALS:	779

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• My best review is Jane Eyre, Because, I know the story very well. So, I coulg easy to write, and I like Jane.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?	○
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	○
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	○
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	○
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	○
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	○
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	○
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	○
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	○
"movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)	○
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? _10__ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. books (1) diary (49) essays (7) links (1) media (1) movies (1) photos (7) portfolios (2) quickposts (12) reviews (16)	---	---
5.3. Links & media	---	---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?	○
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?		○
How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics? _7__ posts including pictures or other graphics	---	---
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?* __1_ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? _0__ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: ... ... ...	---	---

5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. I puted photograph in blog.
2. I separeted the label.
3. I wrote the title every blogs.

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

• I learned about blog in this class. And I could write diary everyday.
  7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
• I am going to write diary everyday!! It's my habit.

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
3. This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.

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TWO BOYFRIENDS

Today, I read the Two Boyfriends. This book is interesting. The main character is Anna, she is very foolish, but I could understand her mind a little. She has boyfriend Tim, but she likes another boy John. In the end, she gave up both!! [44]

Grandmother's house

Grandmother’s house
Today, I went to my grandmother’s house. My relation came in it. And I ate Osechi. It was very delicious. And I enjoy talking with relations long time. I had a good time☆[39 words]

ESCAPE

This time, I read this book. Brown was an innocent man, but, he will stay five years in prison. So, he escaped from prison. He was a innocent man, but, after escape, he committed a lot of sin. He is very ironic man.　[43]

JAWS

JAWS

This time, I read the book, because, I watched the movie. The movie is very scared. Shark is very dangerous fish. After I read book, I don’t want to go to sea. [32 word]

London

London

Today, I read this book, because I want to go in London. This book has history, good spot, sports and museum in London. I want to go to Oxford Street. This book is easy to know about it. [38 word]

A HAPPY NEW YEAR

A Happy New Year. I enjoyed very much in 2007. I went to go to sea, snow board and so on. I could make very precious memories. But, I could not get the job. So, this year, I have to get the job!! I do my best. And I hope everyone be happy in 2008. [55 words]